there are lots of colourful boats in the water. can you see the snowy mountains . what tall trees there are. look at the big posh house. look at the beautiful birds. by benedict and aarron
The mountins are lic big sandjunes.
In the big house ther is a party going on at the party ther are 32 peopole ther.
By the massive tree there are people hunting for rabbits.
At the burnt house there are people getting ready to go on a boat.
People are having a picnic outside on the grass.
By Ollie and Arlo
There are some brilliant mountains shining.
There are people watching the brilliant birds.
There is a cowboy coming out of a cowboy shop.
There is a owl sitting in a tall tree.
There is a old car parked in the car park waiting for its family to return.
by Ben and Dylan
I see shining bright glamorous water
I can see shiny gorgeous snowy mountins.
I can see a beautiful enormous houses.
I can see extraordinary tall trees.
There is a rainbow hamick that is gorgeous.
by Grace and Theo
The pretty purple and blue shimmering mountains are in the light. People are on a pretty red rug on a picnic.
The red and yellow shimmery and shiny boat is comeing into sea.
The green brown really cold tree is shiner than the sun.
The big hotel is filled with people.
In the distance I can see a purple and blue mountains and the sky is shimmering above the mountains!
The blue shimmering water is sparkling in the yellow fiery sun.
A cowboy like person is trying to shoot a bullseye with a bright gold arrow .
There people are having a picnic with delicious food.
everybody at the campsite is having so much fun but soon they will have to go home.
Emily and Daisy
A lazy, tired and young man is dozing in a bright colourful hammok.
One,two,three mum I cant count!
The green and purple mountains are getting bigger everyday because they are magic!
The beautiful deep lake is very busy because people are going sailing on it what fun!
Some people are going birdwaching and are reading a book how many birds do you think they can see?
By Millie and Megan
The boats are floating on the lake like beavers.
The big hotel has lots of people staying in it.
The big tree has a big ladder in it going up to a tree house.
There are lots of mountains in the distance.
There is a man watching the birds with his child.
by Ros and Angus
What a beautiful breeze in the distance that is!
The boy is climbing out a window and he is 9 years old .
That man’s car is very clean and very fast.
Some people are playing archery care fully other wise they might get hurt.
There are some big and small trees near the house.
by Wes and Heath
What a great picture this is!
In the distance the snow- covered the mountains bump up and down for miles.
Bobbing on the lake , the boats are taking family’s to family’s across the lake in under two seconds.
Near the big tree the teenager is practising target.
Hanging on the tree the hammock is gently swaying side to side.
byJessica and Albie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!