5 sentence challenge

there are lots of  colourful  boats in the  water.                                                                          can you see the snowy mountains .                                                                                        what tall trees there are.                                                                                                             look at the big posh house.                                                                                                     look at the beautiful birds.                                                                                                                   by benedict and aarron

5 sentence challenge

The mountins are lic big sandjunes.

In the big house ther is a  party going on at the party ther are 32 peopole ther.

By the massive tree there are people hunting for rabbits.

At the burnt house there are people getting ready to go on a boat.

People are having a picnic outside on the grass.

By Ollie and Arlo





5 sentence challenge

There  are some  brilliant   mountains  shining.

There are people watching the brilliant birds.

There is a cowboy coming out of a cowboy shop.

There is a owl sitting in a tall tree.

There is a old car parked in the car park waiting for its family to return.

by Ben and Dylan


5 sentence challenge

I see shining bright glamorous water

I can see shiny gorgeous snowy mountins.

I can see a beautiful enormous houses.

I can see extraordinary tall trees.

There is a rainbow hamick that is gorgeous.

by Grace and Theo

5 sentence challenge

The pretty purple  and  blue  shimmering  mountains  are in the  light.  People are on a   pretty red rug  on a  picnic.

The red and yellow shimmery and shiny boat is comeing into sea.

The green brown really cold tree is shiner than the sun.

The big hotel is filled with people.

by Alice.

five sentence challenge

In the distance I can see  a purple and blue mountains and the sky is shimmering  above the mountains!

The blue shimmering water is sparkling in the yellow fiery sun.

A cowboy  like person is  trying to shoot a bullseye with a bright gold arrow .

There people are having a picnic with delicious food.

everybody at the campsite is having so much fun but soon they will have to go home.

Emily and Daisy

Five sentence challenge

A lazy, tired and young man is dozing in a bright colourful hammok.

One,two,three mum I cant count!

The green and purple mountains are getting bigger everyday because they are magic!

The beautiful deep lake is very busy because people are going sailing on it what fun!

Some people are going birdwaching  and are reading a book how many birds do you think they can see?

By Millie and Megan



5 sentence challenge

The boats are floating on the lake like beavers.

The big hotel has lots of people staying in it.

The big tree has a big ladder in it going up to a tree house.

There are lots of mountains in the distance.

There is a man watching the birds with his child.

by Ros and Angus


What  a  beautiful  breeze   in  the   distance   that  is!

The  boy   is   climbing    out   a    window   and he   is  9  years  old .

That   man’s    car   is  very    clean   and  very   fast.

Some  people  are  playing   archery care  fully  other  wise  they  might   get  hurt.

There  are   some   big   and  small  trees  near  the  house.

by   Wes and  Heath


5 sentence challenge

What a great picture this is!

In the distance the snow- covered the mountains bump up and down for miles.

Bobbing on the lake , the boats are taking family’s to family’s across the lake in under two seconds.

Near the big tree the teenager is practising target.

Hanging on the tree the hammock  is gently swaying side to side.

byJessica and Albie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!