5 sentence challenge

There is a army plane fliying  in  the  air and a amy  car who  are going to  the  army. Joe  was  feeding  the  brown  and  white  chickens. There is a black  and  white  dog  sitting  in  the  road.There is a bale of hay  in a red tractor .there is a army car speeding verry quikly.

by Jessica, Millie, Willa and Harriet

2 thoughts on “5 sentence challenge

  1. Hello Jessica, Millie, Willa and Harriet,

    I really like the level of detail you’ve included in your sentences. You are very specific about what the chickens, dog and tractor look like.

    Such a good idea to give the boy a name – fantastic!

    Thank you.

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