5 sentence challenge

The boats are floating on the lake like beavers.

The big hotel has lots of people staying in it.

The big tree has a big ladder in it going up to a tree house.

There are lots of mountains in the distance.

There is a man watching the birds with his child.

by Ros and Angus

3 thoughts on “5 sentence challenge

  1. Very well done. Lovely short simple sentences. I particularly love your first sentence. The simile of boats to beavers is superb!

  2. beautiful writing Angus. It always makes me smile when I read your work, WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love Jessica

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