5 sentence challenge

There  are some  brilliant   mountains  shining.

There are people watching the brilliant birds.

There is a cowboy coming out of a cowboy shop.

There is a owl sitting in a tall tree.

There is a old car parked in the car park waiting for its family to return.

by Ben and Dylan

 

One thought on “5 sentence challenge

  1. Ah boys! You’ve caught me! I had to look again for that owl in the tree. I think if I spent hours looking at this picture, I’d still manage to miss something. I really enjoyed your summation of the picture. One small thing, that would make your five sentence challenge even better and that would be to refrain from using the same word in consecutive sentences – in your case, the word ‘brilliant’. It’s only a very small thing, but might be worth keeping in mind for future challenges.

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