5 sentence challenge

The pretty purple  and  blue  shimmering  mountains  are in the  light.  People are on a   pretty red rug  on a  picnic.

The red and yellow shimmery and shiny boat is comeing into sea.

The green brown really cold tree is shiner than the sun.

The big hotel is filled with people.

by Alice.

One thought on “5 sentence challenge

  1. Well done Alice on completing this piece of work on your own. You’ve done a great job of describing some of the details of the picture. You’ve highlighted things I didn’t even see!

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