5 Sentence Challenge

The  boat  is  brown  bright  and  shiny.

The  sun  is  yellow   and  blinding  and  shiny.

All  the  flowers  are   shiny  in   the  sun.

The  blue  shiny   sky.

The grass is green like a lime and very shiny.

By Neve

One thought on “5 Sentence Challenge

  1. Neve I really like that you have put capital letter and full stops in the right places. You have used so many great adjectives “Bright” and “shiny”. Also a simile “The grass is green like a lime”. Could you change the word shiny to a different word, maybe glittering?

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