We were in new zelond at nihgt and a hand dropt fome a portal in the sky it landed on Christchurch. He is mand whith fingers whth a malth and with a nose and is eyebraws . kandy kan werld in the sky like a sooper hiroe .and he floo of the building and he ran and he was chasing us and we and we fote that we lost him and he fand us in a alye and we slide daln and ran a wa and we did and did parkor and we was stil chasin us and we made frense. by benedict hayden
Westwood with Iford Clover Class Blog
The exciting learning of Clover Class!
Wow, what a great story! The opening sentence is great as it immediately made me think ‘oh how exciting, I wonder why a hand has come down?’
Your use of descriptive language of the character was effective in helping me build a picture in my head of what they look like.
I especially like how in the end everyone made friends because I thought maybe the character chasing them was a bad alien but really he was lovely!
Keep up the good work!