Alien from out of space

We  were in new  zelond   at  nihgt  and a hand  dropt  fome a portal  in the sky  it  landed  on Christchurch.  He is  mand  whith  fingers whth a malth and  with  a nose and is   eyebraws . kandy kan  werld in the sky  like a  sooper hiroe  .and he floo of the building  and he ran and he was chasing us and we and we fote that we lost  him and he fand us  in a alye and we slide daln and ran a wa and we did and did parkor and we was stil chasin us and we made frense.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        by  benedict  hayden

One thought on “Alien from out of space

  1. Wow, what a great story! The opening sentence is great as it immediately made me think ‘oh how exciting, I wonder why a hand has come down?’
    Your use of descriptive language of the character was effective in helping me build a picture in my head of what they look like.
    I especially like how in the end everyone made friends because I thought maybe the character chasing them was a bad alien but really he was lovely!

    Keep up the good work!

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