Trip to London

On Sunday and Monday I was in London. First we said bye to Jacob where Lawson played rugby and after started our long car journey. First stop was McDonolds then we drove for 2h where we were met lots of traffic. another 2h later we arrived at our destination.

When we got to uncle Fran’s house we had a good night sleep we woke up early and had breakfast, then drove to Great Ormond Street Hospital.

We waited in the waiting-room then the nurse looked at my heart. They measured my heart beat and took pictures using an ecg (echo cardiogram) machine and some stickers.Then a doctor talked to us, he said I was fine and my heart was ok. We went to a book shop and bought a robot making set then we got to the car and drove home. On the way home we stopped to get  some food and when we got home mummy and Lawson  was delighted.

by Heath

5 Sentence Challenge

Here is a wonderful picture prompt that we used a few weeks ago but you told me there is so much more to see that I thought we could have another go at writing some brilliant sentences. This image is taken from Mrs Skinner’s Five Sentence Challenge website https://fivesc.net Please write your five fantastic sentences in a comment.

five sentence challenge

On the  holidays  i  took  a  gopro   and   a camera.

I watched  pokemon  XY   on  TV.

I saw   a   kawazaki   dirt  bike   in    bradford-on   avon  it  was  cool.

My  holidays   were   so  cool.

I   did my  first    back   flip    on   my   trampoline.

by Wesley

 

I watched  pokemon on TV.

I  watched   lego  batman   on  TV.

The  sky  was   shiny  and    very   sunny.

Wesley    came   to    my    house     to   play on the   Xbox   one.

I   played     with     my   brother   Ben.

By  oliver

five sentence challenge

The mechanic is fixsing the bus because it has  broken down and the people want to get on the bus to go on their day out.

The big posh house is ownd by some very rich people who can aford it.

There are lots of nice yummy things to buy at the Summer market.

The horses are ownd by the King and Queen they have been loked up so that the horses cant exscape!

The man is having a picnic and is eating a yummy sandwich.

five sentence challenge

A man is standing  by  the bus  because   he  is waiting    to    get on  it.

The  horses   are   waiting for   there   rider   to  go   and   have  a   ride   around   the   village

The   lorry   has   broke  down   because it   has   got   no   fuel.

All   the   people   live   in   the   same    house    and    they   all    love    each   other.

The   villagers  are   having   a   bit   of    an   argu    because     they    have    no    money.

5 sentence challenge

The gorl  Jessica ia looking at the white and brown horse.

The people are having a car boot sale because they need some money.

In the garden there are beautiful flowers growing.

In the green house there are some bunnies eating the green vegetables.

It is a sunne and nice day in the country.

5 sentence challenge

The people is waiting for the bus to get out of the mud.

A dog is sleeping because it had a long walk.

All the soot case have fall out.

The horse belong to old Timmy.

In the house lives old Timmy,Mrs gray,Mealy,Tom,White speck.

5 sentence challenge

In the distance I can see a beautiful ,brown and welcoming house.

Next to the barn there was some fast horses and a little girl was looking  at them.

On the grass there was a van with people in it  how were going to make an apparatus.

In the garden  next to the horse there was so veary pretty flowers that I like smeling.

The man is stroking the dog on the grass.