On Sunday and Monday I was in London. First we said bye to Jacob where Lawson played rugby and after started our long car journey. First stop was McDonolds then we drove for 2h where we were met lots of traffic. another 2h later we arrived at our destination.
When we got to uncle Fran’s house we had a good night sleep we woke up early and had breakfast, then drove to Great Ormond Street Hospital.
We waited in the waiting-room then the nurse looked at my heart. They measured my heart beat and took pictures using an ecg (echo cardiogram) machine and some stickers.Then a doctor talked to us, he said I was fine and my heart was ok. We went to a book shop and bought a robot making set then we got to the car and drove home. On the way home we stopped to get some food and when we got home mummy and Lawson was delighted.
Here is a wonderful picture prompt that we used a few weeks ago but you told me there is so much more to see that I thought we could have another go at writing some brilliant sentences. This image is taken from Mrs Skinner’s Five Sentence Challenge website https://fivesc.net Please write your five fantastic sentences in a comment.
On the holidays i took a gopro and a camera.
I watched pokemon XY on TV.
I saw a kawazaki dirt bike in bradford-on avon it was cool.
My holidays were so cool.
I did my first back flip on my trampoline.
I watched pokemon on TV.
I watched lego batman on TV.
The sky was shiny and very sunny.
Wesley came to my house to play on the Xbox one.
I played with my brother Ben.
The cottage is full of sweetens.
The dog is growling at the horse.
The kind man let the little girl on the horse.
The bus has broken down.
The man is selling his old stuff.
The mechanic is fixsing the bus because it has broken down and the people want to get on the bus to go on their day out.
The big posh house is ownd by some very rich people who can aford it.
There are lots of nice yummy things to buy at the Summer market.
The horses are ownd by the King and Queen they have been loked up so that the horses cant exscape!
The man is having a picnic and is eating a yummy sandwich.
A man is standing by the bus because he is waiting to get on it.
The horses are waiting for there rider to go and have a ride around the village
The lorry has broke down because it has got no fuel.
All the people live in the same house and they all love each other.
The villagers are having a bit of an argu because they have no money.
The girl is stroking the dog. The people are having a jumble sale. The man is stroking the horse. The horse is eating an apple. The horse wants to eat an orange carrot.
The ice cream van has broken down and everyone is tring to help.
The old mnan standing next to the ice cream van is selling electronics.
The house has lots of beautiful flowers in the garden.
The hors is darc brown and has a white nose.
The lovely cottage is next to the colourful plants.
The lady is selling some wine to the people.
The people are at a car boot sale.
Jack and Poppy are feeding the horse with hay.
There are cucumbers, strawberries and tomatoes growing in the green house.
The lovely flowers around the house.
There’s some shiney saddles.
It is a beautiful garden.
The littkle girland boy’s names are Jessica and daniel.
There are los of pepl.