five sentence challenge

On the  holidays  i  took  a  gopro   and   a camera.

I watched  pokemon  XY   on  TV.

I saw   a   kawazaki   dirt  bike   in    bradford-on   avon  it  was  cool.

My  holidays   were   so  cool.

I   did my  first    back   flip    on   my   trampoline.

by Wesley

 

I watched  pokemon on TV.

I  watched   lego  batman   on  TV.

The  sky  was   shiny  and    very   sunny.

Wesley    came   to    my    house     to   play on the   Xbox   one.

I   played     with     my   brother   Ben.

By  oliver

five sentence challenge

The mechanic is fixsing the bus because it has  broken down and the people want to get on the bus to go on their day out.

The big posh house is ownd by some very rich people who can aford it.

There are lots of nice yummy things to buy at the Summer market.

The horses are ownd by the King and Queen they have been loked up so that the horses cant exscape!

The man is having a picnic and is eating a yummy sandwich.

five sentence challenge

A man is standing  by  the bus  because   he  is waiting    to    get on  it.

The  horses   are   waiting for   there   rider   to  go   and   have  a   ride   around   the   village

The   lorry   has   broke  down   because it   has   got   no   fuel.

All   the   people   live   in   the   same    house    and    they   all    love    each   other.

The   villagers  are   having   a   bit   of    an   argu    because     they    have    no    money.

5 sentence challenge

The ice cream van has broken down and everyone is tring to help.

The old mnan standing next to the ice cream van is selling electronics.

The house has lots of beautiful flowers in the garden.

The hors is darc brown and has a white nose.

The people an d the hors live in teh gorgeous house.

5 sentence challenge

In the distance I can see a house with beautiful pink flowers around it.

I can see  some horses  that belong to a man called Jon frost.

.I can see a bus that is broken down .

I  saw a lady selling paint to a little girl and boy.

I can see  a black and white dog standing  next to a man.

 

5 sentence challenge

I can see a  wunderful, bright and warm house.

The man is letting the wonderful, b eautioful and kind girl have a go on the horsel

All the wundfui people live in the most wonderful house.

The house is a wonderful farm house.

In teh sun the wonderful house is very new.