The pretty purple and blue shimmering mountains are in the light. People are on a pretty red rug on a picnic.
The red and yellow shimmery and shiny boat is comeing into sea.
The green brown really cold tree is shiner than the sun.
The big hotel is filled with people.
I see shining bright glamorous water
I can see shiny gorgeous snowy mountins.
I can see a beautiful enormous houses.
I can see extraordinary tall trees.
There is a rainbow hamick that is gorgeous.
by Grace and Theo
There are some brilliant mountains shining.
There are people watching the brilliant birds.
There is a cowboy coming out of a cowboy shop.
There is a owl sitting in a tall tree.
There is a old car parked in the car park waiting for its family to return.
by Ben and Dylan
there are lots of colourful boats in the water. can you see the snowy mountains . what tall trees there are. look at the big posh house. look at the beautiful birds. by benedict and aarron
In the distance I can see a purple and blue mountains and the sky is shimmering above the mountains!
The blue shimmering water is sparkling in the yellow fiery sun.
A cowboy like person is trying to shoot a bullseye with a bright gold arrow .
There people are having a picnic with delicious food.
everybody at the campsite is having so much fun but soon they will have to go home.
Emily and Daisy
The boats are floating on the lake like beavers.
The big hotel has lots of people staying in it.
The big tree has a big ladder in it going up to a tree house.
There are lots of mountains in the distance.
There is a man watching the birds with his child.
by Ros and Angus
What a beautiful breeze in the distance that is!
The boy is climbing out a window and he is 9 years old .
That man’s car is very clean and very fast.
Some people are playing archery care fully other wise they might get hurt.
There are some big and small trees near the house.
by Wes and Heath
What a fuzzy little puppy that is!
The house next to the well is shine,green and beautiful like a flower!
How I see the lovely sunshine glimining on the roof.
Two people are getting married so they need some flowers wich ones do you think they will choose?
A little girl called Meghan is holding a lead of an alsation.
I see yellow sun gleaming flowers.
There are two cute dogs.
there are people talking by the garden shop.
There are three dogs smelling each other.
there are lots of flowers.
The pretty red roses are in a little basket.
The colourful flowers are in the old wheelbarrow.
The cute smelly dogs is telling jokes.
The lovely fairy is praying to God.
The boy and girl are getting water.