Five Sentence Challenge

I got a brand new remote car.  Its ten pwons heny and I tesid it in the playgrand.  It is quite heavy and big. I like my car because of the remote control. The colours are awesome. They are blue and red.

4 thoughts on “Five Sentence Challenge

  1. Great writing Arlo! Yes we did have a sneaky go with your remote control car on the school playing field on Boxing Day. I wonder where we will drive it next time!? Love Mum xxx

  2. Hello Arlo.
    Goodness me that car sounds fantastic. Does it make a noise? I do hope that you are careful when you are using it in the playground.

  3. Hi Arlo,

    I really liked your story about the car. It sounds like you had a lot of fun!

    Just to help you, I noticed that the word “tesid” should be spelled “tested”.

    Have a lovely day and keep up the good work!

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