five sentence challenge

In the distance I can see  a purple and blue mountains and the sky is shimmering  above the mountains!

The blue shimmering water is sparkling in the yellow fiery sun.

A cowboy  like person is  trying to shoot a bullseye with a bright gold arrow .

There people are having a picnic with delicious food.

everybody at the campsite is having so much fun but soon they will have to go home.

Emily and Daisy

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  1. Great work girls. One small observation (and it’s not a criticism of your very fine work). Try to refrain from using the same word in consecutives sentences – in your case, the use of ‘shimmering’. It’s a great word, but works even better when only used once. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing. Thankyou!

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