garden center

What lovely red flowers !

What cute dogs !

What a lovely place it is !

There are lots of people there.

What a lovely lot of people.

By Dylan

15 thoughts on “garden center

  1. I can tell Dylan that you really like this picture.
    I really like the things you have chosen to write about and I particularly love your use of exclamation marks! Maybe next time you can think of a different way to begin one of the sentences that you have used ‘what’ for.
    Thank you for sharing your work on the 5SC.

  2. Greetings Dylan!
    You have done a great piece of work next time try doing a bit more words in your sentences.I really like how you’ve used !.

  3. Hi Dylan,
    What a fabulous piece of work! I liked the way you described all of the things in the picture.maybe next time try to start your sentences with a range of openers.

  4. Dylan very good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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