Wons a pon a time soopu hand will sav the day wons agen . I love you darling I love you to my love . Yesday soopu hand sarved king caspu and Queen ilzbuf and prinses perll and prince charming . He jest fell out of the ske . He sarved shoogu land from a monstu .The people of his citey was very prad .3 wes a go he savd the school of yonecons from the spid monser .aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr crid the chidon as they sor the mons . You are my love siad girl hand yes you a my love siad boy hand now I will cis you .
Fifi and Ros
Excellent piece of writing and really impressive effort from you both. I was really involved in the writing and found it very interesting!
Try to remember to use capital letters for names, places and new sentences.
Very well done though, I thoroughly enjoyed it.