sreemer

In the wood screemer in a black rode he was born in 1786 . he is a goast the gost kiled  people 1000000 . In 1986 the goast stoped  killing and there was a postcard was found  but the people did not no who they were . The next year it started to get dark and that ment at the goast came to atack . And the people were perpaird to fight . And a lot of poeple were frozon but the goast was killed . And he went to be under the grownd . There is a magic person is in inthiserble . And the people won the battle and he was nether to be seen. by charlie and hayden .

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  1. Hi Charlie and Hayden,
    How was it, writing a story together? Did you find it difficult keeping it short? Some of our children did at first, but they are used to it now.
    I like the way you gave lots of background information about your character, this builds a picture in the heads of the readers.
    Well done and keep sharing! 🙂
    Mrs Tucker (100WC Team)
    Wirral, UK

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