The unded

Once pon a time a boy named Steve and he billta a unded portal and when he got there he saw blud and bones every were. He went up to him and his eyes flashed open his eyes are yellow and his clowk is black.’thank you for releecing me!’OK I mite go over there out of your way so you can get on . Your not going eney were boy . Ho no. ar . Flash  you are one of me now .no .I will give you a new name how about rook flash.

By Megan and Jacob

4 thoughts on “The unded

  1. Hi Megan and Jacob!
    Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us this week. Our Y2 children use the 5 Sentence Challenge to share their work with others. Have you seen it?
    I really liked the way you set the scene with the ‘blood and bones’, very gory!
    Keep writing and sharing.
    Mrs Tucker (100WC Team)

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